Tin Stories

Give me 50 words, a bit of punctuation
and a minute of your time.

I will tell you a story.

Pareidolia

Jane saw faces in the clouds, with puffy white cheeks, wispy wide mouths and dark divots for eyes. She told me stories about the cloudmen, cloudwomen, cloudchildren and cloudpets. Mom and Dad gave her medicine. Jane is getting good grades now. And she doesn’t look at the sky much anymore.

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The Storytellers

Those who could actually remember what happened at Whetland Gorge were long dead. By the time the tourists arrived in their sneakers and baseball caps, the story had been passed from guide to guide until it resembled truth like a raisin resembles a grape. The tourists listened and nodded sagely.

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Compatibility (The Love Machine)

At first, their differences were pleasant friction. At his jazz club, she laughed, “His saxophone sounds broken!” At her movies, he teased, “That’s no Casablanca!” In time, she couldn’t abide the cacophony of his horns. He disdained her romantic comedies. Too much friction. They heated up, wore down, left broken. 

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Natural Supernatural

You live in a constant state of lag, limited by the speed of your electrochemical pulses, sensing reality always a nanosecond behind. Everything you see has already happened. I live there, in the synapse, outside your perception. You’ve never seen me, but you know I exist. You call me magic.

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Indelible
Thousands of neatly labeled microcassettes lined the walls of The Archive. Perplexed, Bruce randomly pulled, “Morning, July 8, 1982,” from a shelf. He recognized his handwriting. The realization came slowly. Here they were. His lost memories filled this closet from floor to ceiling. And he wept. Just like last time.
Illustrated by Jason Viola of ManateePower.com

Indelible

Thousands of neatly labeled microcassettes lined the walls of The Archive. Perplexed, Bruce randomly pulled, “Morning, July 8, 1982,” from a shelf. He recognized his handwriting. The realization came slowly. Here they were. His lost memories filled this closet from floor to ceiling. And he wept. Just like last time.

Illustrated by Jason Viola of ManateePower.com

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We Talked Until Two

Someone said, “Norwegian.” I was compelled to interrupt the conversation: I once had a girl, or should I say she once had me? You smiled deeply from across the room. The definition of personal compatibility is tolerance of your partner’s unique quirks and odd behaviors. To treasure them is love.

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Cliff Drive
When the door opened at 14,000 feet, suddenly I was 11 years old, pedaling madly down the neighborhood’s steepest street, facing the wind, alive and fearless. I barely heard the jumpmaster’s shouted instructions. I remembered my bike stopped short. Momentum carried me over the handlebars. And then I was flying.
Illustrated by Jason Viola of ManateePower.comStory originally published on June 30, 2011

Cliff Drive

When the door opened at 14,000 feet, suddenly I was 11 years old, pedaling madly down the neighborhood’s steepest street, facing the wind, alive and fearless. I barely heard the jumpmaster’s shouted instructions. I remembered my bike stopped short. Momentum carried me over the handlebars. And then I was flying.

Illustrated by Jason Viola of ManateePower.com
Story originally published on June 30, 2011

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Cliff Drive

When the door opened at 14,000 feet, suddenly I was 11 years old, pedaling madly down the neighborhood’s steepest street, facing the wind, alive and fearless. I barely heard the jumpmaster’s shouted instructions. I remembered my bike stopped short. Momentum carried me over the handlebars. And then I was flying.

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Potential Energy
The artist’s work served no purpose, spurred no action, incited no passions. The massive clay figure stood motionless. When the magician spoke the words, the golem came alive. And the artist lamented that he had lost control of his creation. But then he remembered: there’s no such thing as magic.
Illustrated by Jason Viola of ManateePower.comStory originally published on May 23, 2011

Potential Energy

The artist’s work served no purpose, spurred no action, incited no passions. The massive clay figure stood motionless. When the magician spoke the words, the golem came alive. And the artist lamented that he had lost control of his creation. But then he remembered: there’s no such thing as magic.

Illustrated by Jason Viola of ManateePower.com
Story originally published on May 23, 2011

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Sweet Delight, Endless Night
If we unpack our memories and count our senses separately, our time together it might be stretched near to eternity. Replayed this time, the smell of her hair. Again, just seeing her half-smiles. But alas, we let every precious moment pass with the watch hand’s sweep behind the glass.
Photo by Nidhi Paul. View her Flickr photostream.Story originally published on April 29, 2011

Sweet Delight, Endless Night

If we unpack our memories and count our senses separately, our time together it might be stretched near to eternity. Replayed this time, the smell of her hair. Again, just seeing her half-smiles. But alas, we let every precious moment pass with the watch hand’s sweep behind the glass.

Photo by Nidhi Paul. View her Flickr photostream.
Story originally published on April 29, 2011

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